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Hello, I am not trying to tell you how to draw; this is a friendly critique, so don't take this personal.
The pose is very dynamic; I like how it looks and the color scheme is ad hoc with the theme.

Look for the perspective on the hammer, you have to fix only one line and done.
About the lighting: A little transparency on the yellow can improve the effect.
Your level skills are low by the moment; maybe 1 or 2 years more and you done. I can see many potential on you for the future; cheers!


stay solid!
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:iconblazbaros:
Which line is that exactly?

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I've upload an image to my photobucket account, You can see what I'm talking about here [link] :)

Sorry about my english.

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:iconblazbaros:
huh. . .that helps a lot, thank you very much! (your english is fine XD)

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welcome :) I'm glad you like my help :D

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